random facts/poems/questions and stuff i'll share

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omg longest post EVA!

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sry this messed up post will be late

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can i put a nude pic of a girl for my avatar?

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LOL I'M A GRANGER!

and dudes check this out.


turn off the lights, put some headphones in and put it full screen.

i dare ya

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4TFp71j7UjQ

[Lanac]

Meh, its not scary.

[Quarko]

Yeah, not scary. However the "lyrics" are quite interesting.

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oh you should check out the name of the thing. zolga? right?

it's freaky i looked into 5 reports and came up with one word...

demon god

(well two but )

[Nod_Nod_Nod]

came up with one word...

demon god

Its actually 2 words....

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i said that >.<

i said "(well two but )"

[Nod_Nod_Nod]

i said that >.<

i said "(well two but )"

Ok from now on Ill call you liar, for trying to be better person... Changing your post as soon as you see something like this is kinda sad...

And normally person showing me this kind of mistake wouldnt bring it up this way... He would only say - I wrote it normal...

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>.> nod i begining to think that your getting paranoid >.>

honestly if you really wanted to see if i WAS lieing you would go ask rotacak. + i thought this showed edits in the posts?

if not let me just say this now and for everyone.

I DID NOT EDIT THAT POST.

nod if you didn't see it last time then so what? you don't have to jump on my back when you don't see somthing in BRACKETS

(CAN YOU SEE THIS??????)

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chapter !: A normal day at school

i didn't know that i was going to be sorry for my sister. I thought we would be together until the end of the world... or at least when I left this hell hole. It was on a sunday? Yea sunday morning that it happened.

We just woke up as normal and got ready for school me and her. She was a (half cat- half human)
12 year old girl. She was as tall as me. Growth spurts in her made her like that. She is a sweet little girl with blue eyes and pure black hair. I'm a blondy so i get picked on alot. I'm not that “hotâ€￾ as they say. Everyone falls in love with me and my sis (form what i've heard).

“jake do we have to go to school today?â€￾ she asked with that “light as a featherâ€￾ voice of hers

“yea shanon we do.â€￾ I replyed. today is the “mocksâ€￾ for me and her. Oh didn't i say she has more knowlage then me? Sorry but she does. She skiped 1st and 2nd year here. So she has mocks and so do I. And why sunday? Well why not? “if it's just an excuse to make you lazy then it's better to do the mocks on it now and get it out of the way!â€￾ our teacher said to us. He is a short cubby man (don't tell him that tho) he has blackish greyish hair. If he was to stand next to me he would pass me by about my head length. What's bad is that our science teacher and headmaster is always fighting and the only reason we're getting the mocks on sunday is because to disturb the science teacher.

So that's why we're having mocks now on sunday. The only good thing i can smile at today is that i'm gona go out with the hottest girl in my class (no, not my sis) miss migal sing. Brown hair, brown eyes, cute little breasts (:3), and to top it all off. Cute red as roses lips. As soft as velvet (foud out from experience). My sister just looks at me while i do i face like this -> (X3) if you guys don't know what this face is you havn't lived yet. It's a cruley liped face with the eyes closed. (anyway back to the story!!)

“jake what are you think of? Is it that girl (>:3)?â€￾

“no now you ready?â€￾

“as ready as i'll ever be.â€￾

“ok lets go... hang on whats this?â€￾ i pull out a condom from my sises bag pocket...

“IT'S NOT WHAT YOU THINK IT IS! LOOK!â€￾ she grabs it from my hands and turns it to reveal the lolipop label.

“ok ...that just gave me a surpise is all. Nothing much.â€￾

“uhhh..... yea, what ever, lets go.â€￾

“yea lets.â€￾

a ring. The door... i go rush down to get it and see the mail has come tho the door. I check it.
I see 2 bills for dad and a letter for me. No address. Must be from migal. I open the letter.

My expression has changed compleately. In front of me are 5 pictures of 1 body. A young girls body of about my age. Knifed to a table. Below the pictures it says.

“YOU ARE THE ONE WHO DID THIS TO HERâ€￾

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i said that >.<

i said "(well two but )"

Ok from now on Ill call you liar, for trying to be better person... Changing your post as soon as you see something like this is kinda sad...

And normally person showing me this kind of mistake wouldnt bring it up this way... He would only say - I wrote it normal...

trying to cover up your mistakes is kinda sad aswell.

but just FYI read my post about EDIT:.

this froum should have text at the end of post when the poster edited the post like:

EDIT: last edited by Redemption 1st july 2011 or something

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CHAPTER @:not so normal
day at school.

As i turged down the the almost to real road to my school i looked back at my once safe house at the top of the hill. I wondered if i could just go back there and hide underneath my covers. Like a 5 year old yea. I know but i can't help this fear inside of me.

“JAKE!â€￾ someone behind me shouts.

I look behind me really fast to come face first into my childhood friend, Mary Mallone.
We smack into each other and fall over. My sis, looking over us, just says.

“uhhh are you guys gona make out now or just sit there cuz we have mocks remember?â€￾

“HEY! Don't say tha-â€￾ i was cut short by Marys lips on mine...

... they were cold, as cold as ice. After she was over kissing me she picked me up and whispered into my ear. “Take this fear from me.â€￾

i just looked at her and she just smiled back and ran ahead. I looked at my sis, who had her phone out and was looking at something with a wicked smile on her face (>:3). i asked her what she was looking at, then she skiped to the next photo and that photo took the look off her face...

.. she screamed at the top of her voice and ran to hug me. She shook me a bit but didn't tople me. I picked up the phone and took a look at the picture she saw.

It was the picture of migal and the kinfes. The same 7 knifes in her chest. The same body on the bloody table. But this time there was something else. It wouldn't of been diferent to anyone else if they hadn't takin in the words that was writen on the wall. The new message read:

“Before it consumes me whole.â€￾

there was something before and after but it was too small to fit in the picture. I closed the phone and put it in my pocket for safe keeping while my sister clings on to my arm like it was her only life left. We head back down the road and get into our desk when the intercom crackles and the headmasters says:

“students, we have terible news. Migal Mikeson was found dead this moring with a tag on the wall where she was killed. The tag read:

“take this fear from me,
Before it consumes me whole.
Take this fear from me,
Before it consumes my soul.â€￾

if anyone of you know anyone who knows this or what this is. Please contact the police right away.

I shook my head. “this is crazy! I mean who would write tha-â€￾ cut short by a fat kid about a year older then me.

“hey! Look over there! On the wall!.â€￾ i looked and saw the poem there. And it said underneath it
“by: Migal Mikesonâ€￾

[Redemption]

i said that >.<

i said "(well two but )"

Ok from now on Ill call you liar, for trying to be better person... Changing your post as soon as you see something like this is kinda sad...

And normally person showing me this kind of mistake wouldnt bring it up this way... He would only say - I wrote it normal...

nod look. i'm not going to fight with you but i just wanted you to know that i didn't edit that last post ok?

but you prolly won't listen because of the other 3 or 4 posts i posted earlyer. so why should i care? well cuz i think you should know i have nothing agesnt you.

P.S. is this revenge for the time i described you?